Pointers?

MoonFields

| Hmmmm nice portrait! Seems that you know what you are going for this piece, so that's good!
| As for my criticism, the others have said it already but you can align her left eye a bit and fix the shape a bit on the right. Lips are a bit too close under the nose, so make it a teeennyyy bit lower. o:
| That's it for me lol. Again, it's a nice portrait~

xXCloverX

Thank you for the tips and compliments everyone! They're all very helpful!

Fizzy

I absolutely love your drawing. Maybe you could fix the proportions??