MoonFields Posted on 2017-11-28 00:33:22

| This is amazing!!!
| I love the twists and the ending. Yours is the best imo. :' )

Memm Posted on 2017-11-28 13:50:35

Edited by Meeso at 2017-11-28 21:03

I've read your story, and to be honest, I'm in loooooove with the story! I loved the details and the choice of words , I simply can't describe how much your are talented and how well is the story written Jas! Truly a spectacular job! :)

Crystal2780!! Posted on 2017-11-28 14:47:13

Jasper Posted on 2017-11-28 23:10:43

Edited by Jasper at 2017-11-28 21:19

Crystal2780!! replied at 2017-11-28 12:47
Sheesh!!This one is going to be a challenge to judge.
On the plus side, you did put your heart int ...
Wow thank you so much, I was actually worried you wouldn't like it.

The original copy that I wrote in Microsoft Word had no typos, but something happened with the spacing when I pasted it into this website... I noticed it as well And fixed most of it but I see that a few got left behind.

Also don't worry about it not being a day in my fairy's life, I asked Amethyst before I wrote it if I could go off-prompt a little {:5_103:}

Edit: I went through and fixed all the spacing errors that I could find.

Pumpkin Posted on 2017-11-29 00:14:30

I love it Jasper. It's such a great story.

MidnightEscape Posted on 2017-11-29 19:25:52

This is so good! Great job! ::clapping::

CelestialNebby Posted on 2017-12-3 07:38:00

I just... I just... love this story so much. So emotional, so beautiful, so detailed... ;u; You're an amazing writer.. ;w;
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